This poem was written by Ilham in class - Year 5
The Hidden Danger
The water rushes over your feet,
bringing sea life to an end.
The splashing of waves againsts the rocks,
slowly peeling the moss.
The water soaks your skin,
making you shiver.
The mist blocking your view,
bringing you nowhere.
High tides starts to form,
swallowing the surfers.
Boats piercing its way through the storm,
but actually leading to suicide.
When the water pulls you in,
you will sink to the bottom of the ocean.
4 comments:
Abudding poet by the look of it. Well done
Wow..Ilham did that? congratulations..he does have way with the words.
Budding poet indeed :-D
Al-Manar,
I was hoping he would develop interest in writing :) But alahai... susahnya nak suruh dia menulis..
Dear Cheqna,
I have another poem, but I was too shocked by the words he used that I decided to keep it for the moment. It was the first poem he wrote in class (to my knowledge...)
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